Todays Targets

Today I am going to work further on my double page spread and get feedback to improve it further.

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Double Page Spread Comparison

This is my double page spread so far, to improve I think I should crop my dominant image as the focus of the image gets lost in the background. 

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I think my work resembles NME's double page spread with the letter in the background however I'm undecided as to whether I will keep it r if it looks too cluttered. It also reflects the layout of NME as there is an image on the left and text on the right. 

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Today's Target

Today i'm hoping to get a majority of my double page spread finished and finish adjusting my contents page as I feel that it could still be improved. 

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